Does this strike anyone else as being either 1) too busy or 2) too textbook-y?
Too busy. I get sensory overload from looking at it.
I think the 'textbooky' look was intentional. Still no need to revive a bad look to get the point across...
My eye does not know where to go on this at all. I didn't know what text to read first, or what was the most important thing for me to see. It's really disjointed.
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